So...a couple months ago, I took the plunge and started doing Critters.org, a semi-professional online critique/writing workshop. Basically, it's a group of amateur-hoping-to-turn-pro & pro writers looking to get feedback on their writing in order to improve. I submitted a couple chapters of The Severed Earth through their queue, and got rather complimentary feedback (including … Continue reading God is definitely an Iron, part two…

...and a practical joker.